Date: Wed, 10 Sep 2003 11:15:32 -0400 From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> To: "Michael K. Smith" <mksmith@noanet.net> Cc: FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: Pre-commit review requested Message-ID: <20030910111532.2ad0d166.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <BB825717.1CF08%mksmith@noanet.net> References: <20030908142254.3592ed0d.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> <BB825717.1CF08%mksmith@noanet.net>
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On Mon, 08 Sep 2003 15:56:07 -0700 "Michael K. Smith" <mksmith@noanet.net> wrote: > On 9/8/03 11:22 AM, "Tom Rhodes" <trhodes@freebsd.org> wrote: > > > Any -doc committer want to review the following patch. It is by no > > way an in depth cleanup, but it will take us (myself anyway) one > > step further toward my goal of a good security chapter. > > > > This diff: > > > > o Adds <application>, <acronym>, and other tags as required. > > o Uses the &os; entity. > > o Cleans up the introduction by pointing out what > > version of Kerberos is in what FreeBSD Release. > > o Modifies <indexterm> and title's to help seperate KerberosIV and Kerberos5. > > > > I'm only looking for either objections or "please commit"s and would rather > > not bounce this around for the next three days. Thanks! > > Shouldn't: > > + <para>About the various crypt mechanisms available in &os;, > + such as <acronym>DES</acronym> and MD5.</para> > > Be: > > + <para>About the various crypt mechanisms available in &os;, > + such as <acronym>DES</acronym> and <acronym>MD5</acronym>.</para> > I incorporated this into my commit, thanks! -- Tom Rhodes
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